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erosion - victoria shen



on mondays the ghouls come 

right when the lanterns first erupt with light 

from the flames of the aggrieved 

who lay down to rest but writhe, unfulfilled. 

the subdued mellowness of the midnight moon 

casts its whitish rays on yesterday’s spotted tombstones. they scuffle into the city carrying pails 

of acid and hope, 

hoping to wash away the rotting stench 

of years and decades, even centuries. 

but they are greedy and try to lap up what is left 

of their riches, 

unknowing that memories escape 

faster than quicksand through their ragged, patched pockets as if they have never been there beforehand. 

the ghouls grovel over each other towards the laundromat until the lines stretch past the hotels 

and cleave a clean passage towards the living. 


on tuesdays the spirits arrive 

called by the restaurants’ welcome bells clinking; the private dining room curtains sway 

into the translucent bodies of the hungry. 

they leave a sticky trail of want with stomachs 

that touch their backs. 

after gluttonizing the ready-to-go, boxed meals 

of unrealized birthday wishes and cheap wedding vows, they melt into each other while scuffling 

for an extra quarter thrown into the fountain, 

thinking the extra twenty-four cents will make them more human even though pennies are in abundance; 

the rusting copper blinks at the bottom of the reservoir. but still the spirits trickle away one by one, 

becoming dejected bubbles of food halfway to digestion floating through the alleyways. 


on wednesdays the corpse brides reconvene; 

they infiltrate the town through the back door,

careful to protected their visage 

from the red-eyed crows of midnight 

who are always looking. 

shielded by their veils, they erupt in chatter 

about renouncing the reek of decayed affairs. 

they are vain, desperate creatures 

who think survival is a game of finding the best 

s k i ncare 

products, the ones in line with the times: 

an ailing mother who finally discovers her frozen fawn nestled in a grave of dirt-swollen snow signals 

a hydrating mask of springtime showers; 

later, the sugar-gliders smuggle between spirals 

of the yellow-green stems spilled from the crown of a tree. but they too cannot escape the summer fever, 

so they depart 

with an everlasting reminiscence of the weeping willow’s leafy tears. a morning dew is thus crafted, 

flavored with the blistering of summer sun 

and the possum fathers’ grieved goodbyes; 

it is just thick enough to settle on peeling skin 

and make you feel young again. 

like this, 

each change of a season brings every time 

to the corpse brides a chance of being 

loved again. 


on thursdays the sirens visit, 

their golden bangles recast from a sailor’s 

parting gift into tickets that allow entrance to the gambling dens; 

each ruby bauble cuddles their small wrists 

like a brace that has somehow become 

a mobius strip of the heart, 

impossibly continuous and unable to be 

unwound. one by one the gems are severed from their lodgings like snow peas being torn from their rinds, 

exoliated from their peels until what’s left 

over is only a heap of limbless membranes girded, 

ready to be crocheted into roulette tables.

even the emerald trimmings are abandoned 

as poker chips that suddenly 

apparated onto the table. 

so there goes a lifetime of feeling, 

a receipt 

given away so tattily and without thinking. 


on fridays the town is quiet 

because nobody comes and the guards clean up. 

they sort the unceasing memories of the ghouls, 

unrelenting in the wealth they promise but that have terribly become filth over time; 

the steamy cauldron is stirred with a slight splattering of birthday letters from a first friend, 

a few dashes of bygone, 

oily photographs of watching with a mother 

how the dark-eyed orchid blooms in april, 

two clovers of the thrill of being swept up onto a father’s sturdy, powerful shoulders, 

then nudging the edge of the sky 

and wondering how atlas held it all up without 

anybody else to hold it with him. 

once the stew is finished boiling, 

the guards march through the dry cleaner’s 

and lick up their tips from the marble floor— 

coins that missed the pay holes 

and have settled comfortably in the crevices 

of the barren years below them. 

leaving their talismans to amuse themselves 

with the unfriendly zephr outside, 

they scurry into the cafes 

to restock the cabinets with food 

to keep the spirits only spirit: 

a blackberry cake or a passionfruit wine 

will always keep them coming for more. 

then they scamper away, 

face masks on, into the spas to replace the bottles of rice toner and honey moisturizers with 

products that shine more opaque 

under the northern stars.

thin tissue paper is issued to the drawers— 

the guards know well; they know the brides will be thinking of what can be made a present while they get their nails painted with the world, 

since nobody will count rows 

upon rows of polish if they 

can ponder somebody’s morning smile instead. after, the guards follow the clinks of bone 

die to the casinos 

just in time to see the pirates start 

to gouge out the other eye or 

wedge out a tooth’s silver plating 

in trade of a bracelet lost its ribbons or, 

if they’re lucky enough, a baby 

tendril of sapphire. 

throughout the week, 

erosion grows many faces. 

in its tallies of the days displaced, 

it holds a bit of hopes of the ghouls 

too wishful wishes of the spirits 

some feeling of the corpse brides 

and just enough song of the sirens.




Victoria Shen is a rising Senior at Riverdale Country School in the Bronx. She appreciates New York City as her home. She is a National Winner of the Scholastic Arts & Writing Awards and a 1st place winner of the Barbara Mandigo Kelly Peace Poetry Awards. Besides thinking of creative titles to inform her writing, she enjoys figure skating and playing classical piano.

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